This is really cool Lib! I like the contrast of the grungy guitar and the jazzy upright bass going along with the distorted bells/chimes.
It could potentially be shorter in the 1:44 to 3:00 section? which might make it hit harder for this adhd generation, but I otherwise can't think of anything haha! just speculation, but the structuring is done otherwise.
Sounds like it's ready for some ryhmes! :D