You've got something really special here. My only gripe is that i find that i'm not a as big a fan of story telling songs as i am of conceptual songs that use an array of metaphors to suit the theme of the rap/message/w/e..
for example i remember that misfit island verse you wrote and it might be my favorite of yours because you sort stuck to a theme rather then a narrative....this allowed you to think up and portray a bunch of different little stories/imageries to fit in context to the concept of the song.
I suppose it was all just one narrative as you described the relationship between salt mine/manufacturing/marketing/consumer but it painted a canvas more so then a episode persay.
that's what i'm getting at...the difference inbetween a canvas and an episode.. I imagine when trying to describe a single story to get a message a cross you have to write the message real subtly (think using each of the characters/plot devices as metaphors and having all of academia's egg heads bending their minds figuring out what the relation ship of things are in context to the underlying theme) as opposed to when you write a canvas you can just unleash your mind and rape peoples minds.
that said though your flow is gorgeous! you really got the cadence of your voice to. Love how relaxed it is...really puts it ahead of alot of rappers i hear, especially in combination in the imaginative writing, ryhme schemes, etc.